A Peculiar Party ~ Part Five March 26, 2013
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“Okay. We can’t read the plaque or reclaim Betty’s necklace. Not yet, anyway. Let’s go over what has happened since that night. What have you noticed?”
“Well, we can pop about like strobe lights . . . into scenes and out of them.”
“Like Betty did earlier!”
“Yes.”
“Describe the sensation for me. As best you can.”
“I suspect it’s a bit like time travel. But only in the NOW.”
“Place to place. Not time to time.”
“Yes.”
“Makes sense given the plaque’s word choice: The sands of time be not stilled.”
“The best we can tell, the spell affects the time-space continuum, but only the space axis.”
“So you haven’t popped back in time to visit King Arthur or . . .”
Freddie finished the thought. “Or Merlin.”
“Ah . . . Merlin would be the one to see.”
“Indeed he would.”
“When you say ‘we’ . . . just you and Betty?”
“Teddy too.”
“Teddy?”
Freddie looked apologetic. “I touched him when we got back that night.”
“And that was enough?”
“Yes. What we touch, changes. And not always in predictable or pleasant ways. Fortunately Teddy is still steady.”
I looked around at unweeded beds. “Is that why the garden is untidy?”
“Yes. We haven’t gardened. We don’t want to turn this space into a second Magic Kingdom with singing flowers and dancing palms.”
“Good thinking. One Magic Kingdom is enough.”
I leaned back against Flipper’s tail to consider Freddie’s tale, “That’s why Teddy offered me an imaginary cocktail from an empty tray.”
Freddie nodded. “If Teddy had mixed you a cocktail, it might have been as volatile as a Molotov ~ anything from the nectar of the gods to toxic waste.”
“A sludge smoothie.”
“We haven’t figured out how to predict IT yet . . . whatever IT is. We’re still in the dark. Hence the S.O.S. to you.”
“Give me a few examples. If Teddy had fixed me a drink, what would have happened to the glass? If you know.”
“We never know exactly. But, if you picture the dancing teapot in Beauty and the Beast, you’ll be on the right dance floor.”
“Really? So . . . have all your pots flipped their lids?”
“No. We haven’t eaten since that night.”
“Nothing!?”
“Not a thing. We can drink from the fountain. It provides full nourishment . . . but I miss chewing.”
“Rather like being on a juice fast, eh?”
“Yes.” He chuckled. “Betty is delighted. She’s never hungry AND she’s losing weight. As far as she’s concerned, it’s the perfect diet. She feels younger and more energetic than she has in years.”
“Almost like having your own fountain of youth.”
“Almost. In fact, Betty’s gotten a bit vain.”
“I noticed her eyeing the mirror as she passed by. It seemed out of character.”
“She’s feeling rather like the Belle of the Ball.”
“She’s Belle and you’re . . .”
“. . . the Beast!”
I continued considering, doing most of my thinking out loud so Freddie could correct any misapprehension on my part.
“If you can’t fix food or serve drinks, it’s rather hard to entertain. That’s why there are no other guests tonight. And your King Midas Touch is why you couldn’t get me a chair.”
“Yes.”
“Could I have gotten a chair myself?”
“Most are out of commission ~ any that we’ve sat in are off doing their own thing.”
“Such as?”
Freddie grinned.
“Most seem to enjoy a good game of Bridge.”
To be continued . . .
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Strange stuff going on!
Molotov cocktails and chairs playing bridge.
Just caught up on your story. Quite strange and magical events….perhaps you could call Sherlock Holmes in to help solve all the mysteries going on!
I’ve been missing my weekly dose of “Elementary” on Thursday nights due to March Madness. Perhaps I should invite Sherlock and Watson to join the party in Naples. Or maybe Patrick Jane from The Mentalist? 😀
Even if they don’t join the cast, I’ve got a few FUN characters coming down the pike between now and story’s end . . . a telepathic frog, a clairvoyant madame AND a shaman.
Have you seen that webook.com is now back on line, under new management? It’s now dev.webook.com . Would you like to repost this story there? I’m not sure if the illustrations can be posted on webook, but if they can, you’d have a much larger number of readers, and perhaps a chance to have help with publishing this work.
Thanks for letting me know that WeBook is back on line, but I won’t post this there.
I prefer writing on WordPress . . . greater creative control, the ability to add links and images, and better search capability (using the word search widget).
oh definitely ‘shrooms and toad licking
Wouldn’t that be funny . . . a frog licking a toad (or eating a magic mushroom). 😀
each part I feel more and more as though there is something making me fuzzy 😉
That’s the way I feel each time I re-visit Wonderland by wandering about with Alice.
It is all in the sands of time…..
And in the Eternal NOW. 😎
Popping in and out of scenes…in the NOW…touching others and never knowing what is going to happen…definitely random acts of something, but I’m still holding on for the what! 🙂 You have a great little story here, Nancy!
Thanks, Debra! Imagine if everything we touched changed? Right before our eyes. It would be like walking on quicksand, or egg shells, with a bit of TNT tossed into the mix. *BOOM*
Right – all perfectly logical and straightforward. We all guessed that, of course … 🙂
You get a mention back at my humble abode, by the way …
Straight-forward logic might still make an appearance . . . but only after a few more twists and turns.
I’ll be around straight away. Thanks for the heads up.
This is a magical mystery tour, Nancy and I’m loving it! 😀
Yay! Still to come . . . a telepathic frog, a clairvoyant madame AND a shaman.
Woo hoo! 😀
Reading the comments is almost (but definitely not quite) as entertaining as your story, Nancy! I’m enjoying this surreal adventure…sometimes it’s good to walk down unknown paths.:)
Writing this story was an exercise in letting the path unfold before me . . . one step at a time . . . without straining to see past the headlights.
While Betty is losing weight, lots of strange Quantum physics-like stuff is going on … This has been an entertaining story! 😀
Thanks, Marie. I now sense where, when, and how this tale shall end -> my lips are sealed.
Fantastic twists and turns to the plot, Nancy. I love the idea of this kind of Midas touch.
Thanks, Kate. I’ve enjoyed watching this story unfold. It’s been fun writing without steering toward a pre-conceived destination.
oh goodie I look forward to reading about King Arthur and Merlin – well I assume we will because you gave the wikipedia entry…
I feel terrible, but Merlin does NOT make another appearance in this tale . . . but you can find Merlin, Arthur, and Archimedes here:
oh no how disappointing Nancy!
If I could time travel . . . Merlin is the first “person” I’d seek.
Several readers requested that I post A Peculiar Party Under The Palms as a single page.
Just click HERE and you’ll be whisked through cyber space to join the party. Wheeee . . .