Quiggle’s Search For Spring March 15, 2013
Posted by nrhatch in Nature, Poetry, Word Play.trackback

Wikipedia ~ The March Hare (in Public Domain)
Tired of drifting snow and freezing rain
Quiggle went off in search of Spring
He puddled in mud and slogged in slush
Through fields and marshes full of mush
He saw geese flying high, flapping wings
But he didn’t see any sign of Spring
Robin gathered twigs to feather her nest
Laying blue eggs is what robins do best
Quiggle saw a March Hare doing its thing
But he didn’t see any sign of Spring
Bears emerged from steady slumber
After months spent ‘neath frozen tundra
Bright sunny skies seemed to sing
But Quiggle didn’t see any sign of Spring
Baseball diamonds came alive
With bases rounded amid high fives
Fans cheered at the crack of the bat
But Quiggle didn’t have time for that
Bicycles emerged to sail down streets
Picnic tables groaned with good eats
Life abounded with sweet pleasures
But Quiggle overlooked these treasures
Groundhog Day came and went
Mardi Gras signaled the start of Lent
The Irish celebrated St. Paddy’s Day
As Quiggle continued on his way
Farmers plowed long straight rows
Seed bags stacked, ready to sow
Lambs kicked up wooly heels
Chasing each other between meals
Quiggle walked on, looking high and low
No longer sure which way to go
One day about to abandon his quest
Quiggle spied a sea of yellow trumpets
“Daffodils, daffodils . . . that’s the thing!”
Quiggle giggled, “I found Spring!”
Spring sometimes arrives in slow motion
Casting its spell like a magic potion
With daffodils waltzing, full of cheer
Quiggle knew Spring was really here
Aah . . . that’s better!
The Contest: Write a children’s story, in poetry or prose, maximum 350 words.
For complete rules, see Susannah’s In Just Spring Contest.
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Love this! Those daffodils are the prize!
Thanks, Suzi! If you’re in the mood . . . you have until Monday to toss your entry into the ring. 😀
Lucky Quiggle! Lucky us! We have our first daffodil this morning.. 🙂 It’s teeny but it’s there! Very playful and cute Nancy!
Daffodils trumpet SPRING! 😀
There’s just something special about the gold of daffodils, isn’t there? 🙂 Best of luck on your story!
Daffodils are The Spring Herald. 😀
I love it too. And that’s the last time I pay attention to the groundhog!
Spring is a little rusty this year.
Yes! Spring is being a slow poke this year . . . even on the Gulf Coast of Florida. It’s been chilly.
That was supposed to be ” love” not ” live.” Crazy iPad.
Fixed! Maybe your iPad has spring FEVER.
I love the name Quiggles, ‘puddled in mud’, and ‘daffodils waltzing’. Super waltz into spring!
Thanks, Julie. I expect that lots of folk (in the northern hemisphere) are joining Quiggle’s quest for Spring! 😀
Is there a “no zombie” rule in place by any chance?
For the contest? Not sure. Zombies + Spring = Odd Together. 😉
I am beginning to wonder if there is actually a season of Spring any more. In the past few days we had snow, sleet, rain and temperatures from 0°C to -2°C as expected tomorrow. The daffodils still have their coats on over here.
It’s been warmer today, but we’ve had lots of unseasonably cool weather this year. Hope it warms up for you soon.
My favorite line: He puddled in mud and slogged in slush. That just trips off the tongue!
Thanks. That’s one of my favorite lines too.
Fantastic job! This was really fun to read.
Thanks, Jennifer. Susanna knows how to throw a Spring Fete!
Nancy…so many wonderful spring images…and I absolutely LOVE the name ‘Quiggle’…I can just see a picture book series based on this adorable character.:)
Thanks, Vivian. Quiggle’s name makes me grin.
This is terrific, Nancy! My favorite part is the end – “Quiggle giggled” (totally fun to say!) and “Spring sometimes arrives in slow motion” – isn’t that so true? One step forward, two steps back 🙂 This story is full of evocative signs of spring… I can’t wait til they come to my house! 🙂
Thanks, Susanna. You throw the BEST contests! I loved it when “Quiggle giggled” . . . made me grin. 😀
Nancy, You do such a great job meshing your images with your post topics. I love them all, but the daffodils really are a delight.
Thanks, NC! So much FUN finding suitable images of Spring. I borrowed the daffodil pic from Susanna’s contest announcement. It seemed a suitable end point to aim at.
This is fabulous, Nancy – “Spring sometimes arrives in slow motion
Casting its spell like a magic potion” – so true. Well done 😀
Thanks, Dianne. I had lots of fun with Quiggle’s quest for Spring. Right now, I expect your summer’s on the wane as our winter fades from view.
Yes – we have moved into Autumn which is a blessing in the tropics 😀
Now that we live in a warmer part of the country, winter is more of a wink or a blink than a deep freeze. Much more better. 😎
I suspect that any story I were to write might not be suitable for children under 11. I enjoyed Quiggle’s journey of discovery 🙂
Thanks, Martin. Sounds like your storytelling is tied to your son’s age . . . growing up with him. 😀
Sigh. I saw daffodils today. Lots of them.
I don’t write for children, but I wish those who enter the contest much success.
I thought you might want to give it a go . . . given those lovely letters you’ve written to Cooper. 😀
Nancy,
Wow — lovely rhyming. I enjoyed your poem so much. Loved Quiggle’s journey to find spring.
Thanks, Patricia. I so enjoy Susanna’s contests . . . since writing for children is not often on my radar.
I love the name Quiggle, and the repeated line sure builds the anticipation. Lovely!
Thanks, Hannah. Susanna’s contests are such fun . . . both the writing and the reading.
I have a very full house of guests this weekend, but if inspiration jumps into my dreams… 🙂 Let’s see what happens! You set a good standard with your own creative effort, Nancy!
Thanks, Debra. Busy week end for you ~ it’s a good thing you remember to take time to breathe.
Enjoy your company.
This is awesome! Your story made me smile. Good luck on the contest 🙂
Thanks, Janna. Reading the other entries is a sure sign of Spring. 😀
Enjoyed reading this, Nancy. I felt I was on a hunt for Spring with Quiggle. 😀 I wish you luck with the contest!
Thanks, Marie. Susanna’s contests remind me how much FUN I had making up silly poems for my nieces and nephews.
(Now that they’re older, they’re not so easily amused.) 😉
Quiggles is such a super name. I am picturing a march hare doing its thing! Super poem!
Thanks, Joanna. March Hares + Mad Hatters = Crazy Tea Parties!
Nancy, this is wonderful- made my heart light. Good luck!
Thanks, Donna. It’s such a FUN theme for a contest . . . Susanna knows how to throw a PARTY.
I’m new to this, but it certainly seems that way. :0)
I forget when I found Susanna . . . maybe for the Halloween contest last fall. But she’s always an entertaining read. AND she shares CHOCOLATE on Wednesdays. 😀
I love the name Quiggle. It seems so perfect for your wonderful story. And the pics added another dimension. Love the March Hare!
Thank you, Jill. As soon as the name popped into my head, I knew that Quiggle wanted to be part of this contest. 😀
This is darling! Quiggles is the perfect name! I like the idea of Quiggles and Sybil bumping into each other during their searches for spring.
Thanks, Heather. They both seemed to be searching for “new growth” as a sure sign of Spring. I do too. 😀
Quite a giggle indeed from your charming quiggle!
Thanks, Col! If you want to jump into the pool . . . the contest is open until Monday at midnight. 😀
OK, OK, you can let go of my arm now! 🙂
Hahaha! Wait . . .
Are you calling me an Arm Twisting Bully?
Lovely, Nancy. Full of optimism!
That’s Spring, isn’t it? Hope. Renewal. Growth. And the promise of brighter days ahead. 😎
Fun poem, Nancy – “Lambs kicked up wooly heels
Chasing each other between meals” – this conjures up an hilarious image 😀
Thanks, BB. I don’t know if you follow Cecelia’s Blog . . . but her pictures of the Spring lambs on her farm are adorable!
Loved this. Excellent job. The rhythm was fun and the visuals great.
Thanks, Gretchen. To Spring!
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Fun story, Nancy. Quiggle sounds like a character that could have a whole series. 🙂
I bet Quiggle would love that! He could go sailing, windsurfing, and flying through the air with the autumn leaves! 😀
Very nice entry! I love the name Quiggle….sounds cuddly and cute!
Thanks, Penny. Your insect parade and picnic was a delight!
What an adorable story…and rhyming, no less!
Thanks, Jarm! There have been some really darling entries. I need to swing back around and see the latest submissions.
Very cute! And “Quiggle” is a great name! 🙂
Thanks, Wendy. I’m about to head round and read the rest of the entries.
cute story and love the name Quiggle 🙂
Thanks! Susanna inspired so many cute spring tales with this contest. {{Boing}}
I’m disappointed, and a bit surprised, that this didn’t get into finalists.
Thanks, Col. The stories Susanna selected this time wouldn’t have been my choices. I enjoyed them all but I wouldn’t have been inclined to read them over and over again to a tiny tot.
Your Cuckoo Clock and the Robins Parade and Picnic would have been in my top 7. 😀